Monday, June 06, 2011

Liquid Lunch: Ep3 script

Thanks again to everyone who's been supporting Liquid Lunch around the internet. We've had a great response to the series so far, so we hope it continues to find, and hold, an audience.

If you've caught up with episode 3, I thought you might like to see the first draft script and the shooting draft script; what changed, what gags were removed, changed or improved (e.g I quite like the 'Babestation' gag but it didn't make the 2nd draft cut). In particular, check out Dan Doolan's line in the finished video about 'we could go on a cruise, I could work the bar, you could be a magician' as it came from a terrific piece of improvisation.

Dan and Chris Billingham both did a wonderful job of adding lines and gags, and improved the material enormously with their hard work and enthusiasm. Thanks guys! Anyway, here's the 1st draft & shooting draft script, and you can watch the finished video at the end.

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